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Viva La Gloria Pg 7

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Hello! This is a nice comic; you have good consistency throughout your panels, even in the placement of your background elements, which creates continuity and a believable world.

I have a few things here in regard to your art in general. Firstly, I'll address your sense of depth. There is clearly a foreground and a background here, however they appear very smushed together. For example, in the first panel, I feel like there is no space between the characters, the wall, and the cows, even though the cows are super-tiny in comparison. A quick fix for this problem would be adding shadows behind one side of your characters against the wall, to show that there is space. Another way to address depth is to show us a little bit of the inside of the window, not on the top, but along the bottom and the left side. That way the stone wall doesn't look paper-thin.

Secondly, I have to address your anatomy. You seem to have a fair understanding already, however I can see the lack of structure and consistency throughout the panels. You do have some proportion issues, which I notice in the head. A person's head should be as deep as it is wide: the distance from the top of the head to the chin = the distance from back of the head to the front of the face. The size of your character's head determines the size of the rest of their body.
Here are some basic anatomy tutorials: 
-Anatomy Tutorial- by odduckoasis  Nsio explains: Know the Rules by Nsio

One last thing: Your lighting! You have some nice colors going on, and although there are some darks, you're really missing the lights and the dark darks, which will make your characters appear more 3-dimensional.

In total, this is a very nice piece, it is just lacking some polish! Thank you for taking time to consider these suggestions! Keep up the good work! :thumbsup:

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